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Shakespearean Tale Mangled

Romeo, my Romeo, I adore thee, whispers Juliet, oh you cause my heart to race with each tiny beat, many times I dreamt being a wife and all your own, end this torment, sire your babies, take me home, oh, Romeo, beloved Romeo, say you will have me. No, Juliet, I'm afraid not, replies hard-to-get Romy, age and situation tell me we're just not meant to be, circumstances do not smile on us, my luckless lady, eighteen summers you are whilst I'm almost sixty, sire babies? spirit is willing but the flesh is weak. Daytime arrives and starry-eyed Romeo awakes, realizing he was dreaming from night till daybreak, engaging in romantic thoughts he could ill afford amid obligations and a quite unforgiving landlord; might as well start working, go straight for the kill, sleep and nightmares would not pay his utility bill!

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Date: 10/11/2008 3:26:00 AM
Hahaha! I really did enjoy reading this, Sir. Congratulations for being featured :) Teri
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Date: 10/11/2008 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your funfilled poem being featured!!! Peace Fathima
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Date: 10/8/2008 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on having this very enjoyable poem featured. Regards Heidie
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Date: 10/6/2008 10:44:00 AM
Muahahahahaha! This was truly awesome Wilfredo. Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week. I thank you for the giggles, once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 9:07:00 AM
LOL awesome here, Fred. Going through the writes of the week with all the trauma, drama and intensity, its wonderful to come upon one with fun-filled laughter and a very clever twist on Old Will. Brillant as always, congratulations on this wonderful featured write!
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:30:00 AM
Ohhh yes !!! , I can bet ole Billy Spokeshave is choking on his " Homlette " in his " Merchant of Bennets " tomb ... As Julie said ,Freddio , Freddio , where fart art thou... I can smell thee in the distance ... Freddio , thou art " barred from Avon " ....
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Date: 10/6/2008 7:31:00 AM
HA! Fred!! Sixty and the flesh is weak. He definitely WAS NOT a sailor. Sailors die at the age of 95, being shot by jealous husbands. Congratulations on this mangled Shakesperean Tale being featured. If he's in that bad a shape, he better not scale the wall. Tell him to take the damn elevator. The next thing you know, he'll want a handicapped sticker to go parking on his date. Have a great politically incorrect day. Vince
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Date: 10/6/2008 3:26:00 AM
Wilfredo this poem is excellent - a little love - a little fantasy and just a dash of humor - great job - congrats on being featured his week and God bless
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:57:00 PM
This one made me smile. An unusual take on Shakespeare's plays! :) Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2008 4:58:00 PM
Interesting take on the Shakespeare play. Thank you for gving me a chance to chuckle. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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