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Dedicated to my beautiful sister, Dr. Barbara Voglino, with thanks for introducing me to some of the greatest literature ever penned. Love you, Sis! The bedroom we shared, Always quiet as a tomb Until my sister Bobbie would ask If I wanted a tale She spoke of a white whale And a captain named Ahab, bent on revenge My favorite featured a black bird called “Raven” I loved every story And the lessons they taught She even shared Shakespeare Her voice was so gentle -- I was under her spell I asked so many questions, oh my! On the wings of her stories, to dreamland I’d fly Now as we age, I dread the dark time When angels will carry one of us away No children have I; our parents are gone She’s eleven years older, but I don’t know how I could live without her, our bond is so strong Still, years pass by and this I know My storyteller and I will one day part Each time we talk, we end with, “I love you” And I make sure she knows how I learned To love Shakespeare and more, from stories she told These memories I’ll cherish No matter how old *Written December 9, 2020 For L. Milton Hankins “Story from Your Childhood” Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/7/2021 7:49:00 AM
awww, what a lovely tribute to Bobby, hon
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Date: 2/23/2021 2:28:00 PM
Carolyn, what a beautiful poem, you and your sister are very close and love each other and love never dies, well done _Constance
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Date: 1/18/2021 12:58:00 PM
How I envy you dear Carolyn. Many sisters I have, yet we are very much distant; consequence of our childhood. May you and your sister have many more walks together.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/18/2021 2:17:00 PM
I do feel blessed to have Bobbie in my life. We're getting older now, so each time we see each other, we feel grateful.
Date: 1/13/2021 2:09:00 PM
Beautifully penned tribute Carolyn. Always, always end with "I love you." Linda
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, You have penned a heartfelt tribute piece to your sister. It moved me to the brink of tears. I could see the love and strong bond you have for her in each line. You are blessed to have such a person in your life. This is a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/18/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Didn't place in the contest, but I did enjoy writing it! Have a merry Christmas.
Date: 12/14/2020 2:56:00 PM
I have my siblings , as well feel those emotions. Great collaboration with Paul. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/14/2020 7:33:00 AM
Carolyn, "No children have I; our parents are gone She’s eleven years older, but I don’t know how I could live without her, our bond is so strong"...Came to congratulate you on your collaboration with Paul in poem 'Wanderlust', only to find you creating another poem that proved dear. The love between siblings is a special place, a place known as our original and final home. -Richard
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Date: 12/13/2020 6:35:00 PM
These earthbound angels who come into our lives and teach us so much. It seems the older we get the more we realize just how special they are. Thank you for sharing this wonderful childhood memory. ~ Elaine
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Date: 12/13/2020 5:53:00 PM
Well written. You have shown what a special sister you have! :)
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Date: 12/13/2020 12:37:00 PM
How lovely to have such a close bond with a sibling, Carolyn, and it's wonderful how it survived the passage of time. The influence she left on you is a gift that has lasted you a lifetime. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/12/2020 10:26:00 PM
what an amazing dedication, and yes i too am at that time of life, Carolyn, where thoughts of losing someone dear comes to mind..i love the poetry here and the sincerity, to my fav's
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Date: 12/12/2020 10:34:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, It is scary thinking of losing someone you love passing on, but we all have to go one day and I must be perfectly honest, though I have faith and love God and acknowledge Jesus, I am scared of death, some say they are not, I am scared of loved ones I'll leave behind, scared of dying, death to me is something I can't grasp, it is too final. I understand you, cherish and love your sister as she does you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/10/2020 10:53:00 AM
Stephen Foster's, "Old Black Joe" is a reminder that some of us outlive everyone else but we are never alone. Enjoy your good fortune of having a sister for so long in your lives! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/10/2020 10:27:00 AM
This is an poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace, Carolyn. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and stay enlightened with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:33:00 PM
Hello Carolyn … what a wonderful set of memories you have Carolyn that bonded you both together for eternity. Really enjoyable verse Carolyn - Lindsay
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Date: 12/9/2020 6:42:00 PM
Wonderful memory. It was a sad day when mom lost her twin. Hugs...you’re both still on Planet Earth.
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Date: 12/9/2020 5:54:00 PM
Such a wonderful gift and a wonderful bond you and your sister share. May it always simply be so, Carolyn. Peace, Gershon
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Date: 12/9/2020 2:15:00 PM
This is such a sweet story Carolyn--childhood influences last forever--especially from family. Your sister made quite an impression on you and it shows in your aptitude for creative writing. Heartfelt write--a joy to read!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/9/2020 2:19:00 PM
There is probably no one who influenced my life as much as my sister. I still look up to her and we enjoy every minute we spend together. Thanks for reading, my friend.
Date: 12/9/2020 2:08:00 PM
...fell in love with edgar allen poe and willian shakespeare in grade eleven.... never recovered........stan sand
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/9/2020 2:15:00 PM
People think Shakespeare is "high brow," but he wrote for the masses. Thanks for reading. I still love Poe too.
Date: 12/9/2020 1:26:00 PM
A beautiful dedication to your sister Carolyn, she was a great inspiration to you, it shows in your poetry. Tom
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/9/2020 2:00:00 PM
She was a fabulous storyteller, Tom. She and my father had that gift. I plan to show her this poem over Christmas. So glad I won't be alone again this year! Thanks for the visit.

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