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Shaken Beyond Words

Shaken Beyond Words Can you grasp the need I have One that overtakes me each day Yet you remain just out of reach Never quite touching When I want to feel you pressed tightly against me in passion Teasing my being so gently Provoking ecstasy beyond words My soul cries out to yours My essence utters inarticulate sounds as it cries out Needing, an urgent want the anticipation overpowering Leaving me shakened beyond words

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James Inman

Date: 6/30/2020 7:29:00 AM

An intense and beautiful fantasy, but it seems only to be a fantasy. Smooth flow and well written lines. Your first line grabs the readers attention and each line increases the tension until the final release of being left shaken. Well done.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/2/2020 12:31:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comment and read!;)

John Fleming

Date: 6/28/2020 4:15:00 PM

Straight from the heart, Poetess. Lovely piece of impassioned and sensuous writing -- greatly enjoyed! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/2/2020 12:31:00 PM

Ahh John thank you my dear! Warmest of affections!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2020 11:59:00 AM

O, the frustration of anticipation shaken! Sensual dynamite, this write, Brenda. Smiles, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/2/2020 12:33:00 PM

Ahhh my favorite poet who makes me smile all the time! Well I’m working my way back into the swing of things and will be by to see how you will make me smile again my friend thank you!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/30/2020 10:08:00 PM

So intriguing - your expression here is intense and hopeful. I love it. God bless you dear friend, with many more interesting poems. Much love sent to you, Gina

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/6/2020 11:05:00 AM

Gina thank you so much!;)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/30/2020 10:30:00 AM

Whooh nelly! Palpable! Oh my. I have felt that before, a visceral full body ache, SO well expressed! xomo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/6/2020 11:04:00 AM

Lol thank you Mo!;)