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Shaken

your heart is shaken it's perspective now jaded no strength to move on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/16/2009 12:59:00 PM
This is more of a Senryu, nice 5/7/5
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Date: 9/16/2009 6:40:00 AM
Nicely done with lots of emotion. Sara
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