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Shake It

He took me everywhere, thought I was hot, Love did me bad, had my stomach in knots. It seems it has been days since I slept, cause all I did was wept. Could not listen to the radio, my mind kept playing our video. Shake It. He is in my head, he is in my head ! But no longer in my bed. When he said it would; I did not think he meant until the next female went past ! I had to find another way. So I started to pray. Shake It. Now, today I am much stronger, I crave his touch no longer. I used to only see the blues, now I see different hues. Always stay in control of you; for if you do not , you will be his slave for true. Shook !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2016 1:02:00 AM
nice to see this one again. SKAT---
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:56:00 PM
Dorothy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/15/2015 9:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! Beautiful poem. I can't wait to read more! Hope you enjoy it here as much I do. <3 Tasha
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:09:00 PM
Dorthy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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