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Shadows At Night

Those shadows in the dark of night with howling winds that whip the air, so oft can stir an inner fright if what we see's not really there. Hair stands on end tween wind and fear; the tree limb shadows dance around like eerie snakes, entwined, austere, they make their patterns on the ground. Our minds paint images so true that speak to us like living scenes; the shadows in the dark undue our courage while we conjure schemes. The shadow forms sway two and fro like creatures of the night they creep; our senses dulled by vision's flow, like dreams come live while we're asleep. Our daring fades with night's black sky, and though the moon casts her pale glow, the shadows play and so defy our sense what's real and what we know. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest 415 Sponsored by Brian Strand Judged: 03/27/2018 ~1st Place Contest: Second Chance #3 Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 05/03/2016

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Date: 3/30/2018 11:05:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Sandra. Congrats on your fine win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you again, Line, for your congrats and support! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/6/2016 12:50:00 PM
Congrats Sandra, for your awesome placement with this dark piece!!! I wish movie directors would use your poem in a horror movie!! (just a thought)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy, for your congrats and very supportive comments! I am pleased that you enjoy the poem. Sandra
Date: 5/4/2016 8:57:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. A wonderful Quatrain on the dark of the night. This is another i am glad to see in a winning spot, the write does so deserve to be. This has to be a seven Sandra. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2016 6:09:00 PM
Hi Mike, thank you very much. I am pleased that you enjoyed this poem. It received an NA in two prior contest! Sandra
Date: 5/3/2016 7:53:00 PM
Sandra unbelievable this got NA! can't believe it. Congrats on your well deserved top win! :) Be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:47:00 AM
Nicely done...cant decide which stanza I like the best, they are all great. BG
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Date: 11/9/2015 6:36:00 AM
Sandra love the tempo you have here.. and you brought me to the scene where shadows looms.. ~Olive Eloisa -`)
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Date: 11/8/2015 1:25:00 PM
Very well thought out and organized Sandra. Just an excellent poem.
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:15:00 AM
This is wonderful, Sandra. Isn't it amazing...that we're so much more afraid of things we can't see than those that threaten us before our eyes?
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