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Shadows

A setting evening sun displays thy silhouette on caftan dress, Reminding of thy same shadow formed by a morning sun. Sun painted by morning or evening light thou art my love.

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Elaine George

Date: 5/7/2011 9:49:00 PM

Beautiful, William, Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:32:00 PM

Wonderful to read. Congrats on your win, william.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:18:00 PM

awesome... best congrats for the surefire win! :) hugggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:42:00 PM

What a fabulous image you painted, William. Congratulations on your win in the Sweet Sijo contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 1:04:00 PM

Nice Sijo here, the first line has been so beautifully penned , enjoyed it..Congrats on your win William..gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations William on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 10:31:00 AM

Nice one William! I think 'setting' in your first line is a typo and should hav been certain. Hope dat's right? Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 8th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best. Adeleke

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 10:29:00 AM

William, it's great to see you in the top ten. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2011 6:29:00 AM

congrats to you..I lovel poems about shadows..beautiful. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2011 4:50:00 AM

Congrats Will on your wonderful winning poem in Sweet Sijo contest with this excellent entry my friend.. hope u are doing well.. enjoy your special win with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 4:37:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Adeleke, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2011 11:40:00 PM

Sweet sijo!!

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/31/2011 7:27:00 PM

Shadows reflect the heat of the dawning day, and refract the waning light of the ending day. A nice, exposition on the stalking shadows!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/31/2011 6:45:00 PM

Very beautiful, William, Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2011 5:41:00 PM

Nice sijo on shadows with apt expressions, William

Judy Riley

Date: 3/31/2011 3:42:00 PM

Going back to days of old. I love the Old English style. I am not so familiar with this type, but it is short and sweet, thanks for sharring Judy

Judy Riley

Date: 3/31/2011 3:41:00 PM

Going back to days of old. I love the Old English style. I am not so familiar with this type, but it is short and sweet, thanks for sharring and I will check it out, i like different types of poems. thanks for sharring. Judy