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Shadows

Twilight has fallen that's when you see her Dancing in the moonlight goddess of shadows Swaying side to side wind playing with her long hair She entraps you her hyponotizing stare Taken away your her new captive Sweet, darkly melodic laughter following her into the dark Giving your life away to the sweetest sin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 10:58:00 AM
Scary! not into vampires but this is very well written
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:12:00 PM
hehe....AWESOME...i love vampires, so it ok...lol...beautiful piece...God Bless and keep writing...-Brittany-
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Date: 3/5/2010 3:15:00 PM
This is like a sirens call. It's just really succinct & sensual. It fits so well the subject. Nice read toots. <3
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:49:00 AM
Good job all around
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Date: 3/5/2010 8:39:00 AM
very nice and do you want to chat?
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:42:00 AM
very nice i like what images it put upon me good work keep it up
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:29:00 AM
Good imagery, mental pictures are swirling. good delivery of phrasing. ***** ---Mike Ruff
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:13:00 AM
That's what happened with me and my bf derek*May he rest in peace*. This poem brings up many happy/sad emotions for me. ITS WONDERFUL though!!!!
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:23:00 AM
Deep and good :)
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Date: 2/28/2010 12:30:00 PM
This poem..is deep...Following sin..following darkness...living death..deep indeed..Charma
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:18:00 AM
chat?
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:45:00 AM
I love Vamps and great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:21:00 AM
it's a wonderful poem, it got my attention from the start, I'm a very big fan of immortal and vamprish thing. keep writing. Love, Johneta
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:08:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful, makes me want to sway to the rythem with her...the funny thing is, is it brings out the vamp in me...mmh, beautiful really. truly inticing.
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:09:00 AM
i like it it seems lusty to me and i really loved the imagery(lol u know i do)i thought it had a beautiful darkness toit and i loved it!Jo
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:09:00 AM
This is awesome i love the vampire theme
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