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One memory, found, has cradled this moment, exquisitely composed with infinite detail. Once lost with disease, it is briefly retrieved, just for this moment, before it is gone. She smiles as she holds it, as if it has pleased her, a small golden flashback to fondle awhile. It came from the darkness, like a small shaft of light, on a small mote of dust that has tumbled in flight Poised in the sunlight it has cradled the moment But, then is forgotten while it falls out of sight back into the shadows that cradle the night ________________________________________________ 7/5/16 Contest: Cradling the Moment Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 7/10/2016 8:54:00 AM
Your poems are always exquisite and amazing... This one especially.
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:02:00 AM
Your poem was beyond moving Carrie! You described this disease so splendidly. I am faving this gem! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:19:00 PM
Wow, amazing poem. Good to see she chose a worthy one here. Congrats.
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Date: 7/8/2016 11:24:00 AM
I like this very much. Congratulations. I could read it like a loop with the last line becoming the first again and with the moment recurring.
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Date: 7/8/2016 10:20:00 AM
Carrie, a wonderful write and a big congratulations on your win in a contest with only a few wins, 7 ~
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:36:00 AM
Your words stirred deep emotions in me, Carrie, and what a blessing to be able to cradle one last beautiful moment of life, even for a second. Congratulations on your placement on this very short list of winners. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/7/2016 6:21:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, for your top placement wuth this fine piece!! :-)
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Date: 7/7/2016 2:28:00 AM
This needs more work, but was better than the thirty under it. I didn't have many good entries this time.
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Date: 7/5/2016 8:07:00 PM
Oh wow extremely well done. I read it actually while sitting next to my grandmother who suffers from dementia (and who I find myself struggling to maintain patience with) and it reminded me to be a bit more deliberate in how I view and treat her. Impactful. I was considering writing something for this contest but now I think I'll pass =)
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