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Shadow of Senryu Suite 5

Concept of sameness within family nuance... blood line prevalent. When The link is blood the brain a mind of its own... tolerance prescribed. Honour each other respect is earned not a gift... like an open mind. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/23/2012 11:55:00 AM

What a nice quotation of sameness, liked much coz it has reality in practical life. Carry on my friend. Loved always, bl

Elizabeth Landon-Lane

Date: 10/19/2012 10:27:00 AM

What a "Shadow" my firiend...and how beautiful..but then truuth and honor are always weapons of love, aren't they..?!! The power in your words, echo back to me my own feelings. When I wrote Democracy, Republican Style, I could have been replying to your Shadow of Senryu Suite 5. Thank you again for yor insight.

David Williams

Date: 10/19/2012 4:00:00 AM

just having a second peak Harry and it's even better second time around, well done my friend, sorry to hear your eyes are giving you jip again hope things improve quickly for you, I too will not be around for a few weeks now, if I get five minutes to myself I may dip a toe in see how the water is, take care...David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2012 2:05:00 AM

SO SORRY HARRY LUV TO HEAR OF EYE ISSUES PLAGUING U .. I ALSO AM DEALING WITH BLURRINESS SINCE MY CONCUSSION IN AUGUST .. THANKXX FOR YOUR SWEET ENCOURAGEMENT .. I WOULD LUV TO WRITE POEMS FOR LOVERS AND WEDDINGS .. I HAVE DONE SEVERAL FOR FUNERALS AT CHURCH .. WELL SOMEDAY I'LL BE AT THE RIGHT PLACE AT THE RIGHT TIME LUV .. STAY WELL

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/17/2012 9:17:00 PM

So clever!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2012 1:04:00 PM

MISS U HARRY LUV .. HOPE ALL IS OK ..

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 1:36:00 AM

Thoughtful words penned here Harry.Very good Senryu.Best wishes to you.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/15/2012 5:32:00 PM

Wowsers! Epic piece! Very inspirational! Thanks for this. Always, Laura

Paschal Aroke

Date: 10/15/2012 3:55:00 AM

Very great.I will make this poem my daily dose

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2012 1:27:00 AM

this is the essence of familial respect, harry...captured as only you can do... just beautiful!.. :) huggs

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/14/2012 1:28:00 PM

Great message you have pour out here my friend. Excellent. Michael

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/14/2012 12:54:00 PM

Absolutely fantastic Senryu - A winner in the contest. Thanks Harry for your enlightened comments on my poem the Journey of Love. The fact is that you have revealed the soul of the poem. In writing Quatrains I am inspired by the Urdu Language poet Josh Malihabadi whose 700 Rubai'yat contained in two books I have translated into English Quatrain. One of my books was published in USA and the second one's manuscript is being edited and will go to the press shortly. Regards

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/14/2012 8:34:00 AM

Harry; This is good. I like your last stanza. Respect is earrned, it's not a gift. Good luck in the contest. Lucy

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/14/2012 2:02:00 AM

Excellent write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/13/2012 9:08:00 PM

Catie gave us a hard job! Light & Love

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/13/2012 9:05:00 PM

Nice re-write !!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/13/2012 8:21:00 AM

I JUST REWROTE SHADES OF GREEN FROM CATIE .. IT WAS FUN .. SENDING U SOME EYE CANDY SUNSHINE HARRY LUV ..

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/13/2012 8:08:00 AM

Very stimulating theme here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 12:43:00 AM

Catie has a very nice way of reflecting on her thoughts and you have emulated that. I sure wish I had the time to rework one of her poems. This is one contest difficult for me to get to. Good luck in her contest, Harry, and soupmail.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2012 10:15:00 PM

WONDERFUL PERCEPTION OF CATIE'S POEM HARRY LUV .. GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST .. HAPPY WEEKEND..AM ON PAIN MEDS FOR MY HANDS STILL .. PAINFUL AS EVER BUT POETRY AND NEW BABE KEEPS MY MIND OFF ME .. THANKXX FOR ASKING LUV ..