Shadow of Pain

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I painted the shadow of pain in the sky. So it will fade as the rain falls down. Release all feelings that haunts me inside. As my tears gone by from these eyes. Wrapped around my body of thin silhouette. While the wind gently blows this hidden ache. Cover up my sorrow under the moonlight shade. Comfort my broken heart in silent serenade.

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Fj Thomas

Date: 4/10/2018 4:42:00 PM

Aiyah this is very touching and very beautiful.

Date: 12/5/2017 10:43:00 PM

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/5/2017 6:16:00 PM

Deep poetic ache painted beautifully.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/21/2017 6:19:00 PM

So beautiful Aiyah. The first line would be gorgeous etched in calligraphy on a wall as a reminder to release what ails inside. The nature elements are inspiring woven through such sad human emotions. Always a joy to read your lovely words. Be well my sweet friend xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2017 12:41:00 PM

Dear AiyaH, ... your first poem in 2017 - A really wonderful poem with deep feelings - Love the last verse - Greetings and warm thoughts to you my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)