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Shadow And Vienna Couplets

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Shadow And Vienna Couplets

She is the dearest friend I know way back in high school 
She was the one who had my back when boys did rule 
They taunted and made fun calling Messy sticky tooth 
Shadow told them to get lost, giving them the booth 

Shaking my fist, I put them to rout
sending them fleeing to their hideout
I dusted you down and gave you a hug 
you smiled tenderly as you felt so snug

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:00:00 PM
    thank you Shadow, you did great, we make a good team, love ya xxx

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:31:00 AM
    A tender yet fiery poem of supportive friendship. Kudos. I hope u read mine too.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty from us both glad you enjoyed it Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:26:00 AM
    Shadow, you showed how devoted you when it comes to your friends, I know you are a great person with good heart. you are like my poet hero. *luv ~ SKAT ~

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi SKAT I do try my best ty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:38:00 AM
    a cute write , enjoyed, ~always, Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think others will be adding to it lol ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:23:00 AM
    Sweet and very cute, congratulations to both of you! Don't forget that shaking fist, it is always much needed. :) G.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Giorgio fist eh comes in handy ty for your time Shadow x smiles