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Shadorma Poem

Shadorma Tiny steps Ornamental pool A cool eye Summer’s day A long ominous silence Endless tears.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2012 7:55:00 PM

I really like this shadorma poem!

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/21/2012 4:12:00 AM

thank you andrea

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/20/2012 2:46:00 PM

very sad but nicely worded. good one!

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/21/2012 4:12:00 AM

thank you iLene

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/20/2012 12:53:00 PM

An interesting poetry form I had never seen before. Beautiful imagery, though, and I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/20/2012 1:56:00 PM

thank you Joann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/20/2012 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for adding your spices to the soup Jan. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/21/2012 4:13:00 AM

thank you Carol