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Shabbat Shalom

Sweet woman of Yahweh sing to me the Song of Songs song of love with kisses of wine. I desire you as Adam desired Eve primordial affection this knowledge I seek of you my beloved one. You are dark and beautiful but grace alone is deceitful beauty by itself ever so vain you my love possess both coupled with the fear of Yahweh for you are deserved of praise. I seek you when dusk turns to night Shabbat the remnants of daylight is in your eyes leaving a kiss of the days memory. Let us read from the books of Zohar we are surrounded by the Kabballat angels where the Shabbat Queen restores our love each week. Oh my love suspended are we between the secular and the sacred. Almighty God has created this wonderful world for us in radiant shards and sparks of light tonight we tend our souls. Come let us embrace the Kaballah I draw for you a most wonderful mandala for my darling a dream is dreamed three times. The evening is upon us I see over your shoulder falling your hair in serpent like ringlets your black hair is twisted to allure you to me my new found lover Shabbat Shalom....

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Date: 9/15/2013 7:43:00 PM
Beautifully done and with such passion I enjoyed this write and your words put to each line with such feeling.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/15/2013 7:48:00 PM
Hi Cheri, Thank you for your visit and kind compliment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 1:20:00 PM
wow this is a beautiful and an amazing write it flows sensual and very visual great write ken tina :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 1:24:00 PM
Hi Tina, Thank you kindly for the visit and beautiful comment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 6:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work based upon Song of Songs or Song of Solomon..Deeply emotive and passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
Than you Sara for visiting...It is always a pleasure to read your work as well.. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 6:30:00 AM
excellent piece top notch my old friend i really enjoyed
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
Hey Liam, Thank you my good friend.. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 4:39:00 AM
KEN!!!! This is so so amazing. So...beautiful, sensual, yet loving....Oh! To my favorites for sure!!! I keep the the Sabbath day....That is our day of worship. I have a book on making the Sabbath celebration a delight. References to Song of Solomon...All that you wrote made this an enthralling piece....WOW
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Date: 9/13/2013 4:45:00 AM
Hi Eileen, Thanks so much for stopping by and the beautiful compliment. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 1:48:00 AM
- An "fairytale" so beautiful, Ken! - Have a nice Friday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
Hi Anne, Thank you for the visit and kindest comment. Ken
Date: 9/12/2013 5:31:00 PM
Nice mystical poem. I recently posted a Shabbat poem on this site,too. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/12/2013 5:38:00 PM
Hi Matthew, Thank you for the visit and comment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/12/2013 3:22:00 PM
I give you a seven for this. It is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:26:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, Thank you for visiting and the kind comment.. Ken

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