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Sexy Sultry Smile

Nancy needs Norman, naughty new negligee Sexy sultry smile, she seeks satisfaction Moaning mattress memories, masterfully melding Orgasmic origami, hour on hour Every entry explored, ecstasy enhanced Elevated energy exceeds every expectation She smiles, sighs, somehow sad yet satiated First attempt at this form. For Dr. Ram's Alliteration contest.

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Date: 7/25/2014 4:51:00 PM
my favourite form, here's hoping you do more and thanks so much for all your comments..curtsy bow...
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:07:00 AM
Congrats richard on yor greater win! A sensational kinda notty bawdy alliteration eh. Dint understand it completely though. Cheers.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:31:00 AM
She was attempting to feel her emotional needs within a physical encounter.
Date: 7/13/2014 2:52:00 AM
Great one Richard! Congrats on awesome win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma.
Date: 7/13/2014 12:33:00 AM
haha, a humorous sexy one. pretty naughty too!!! I see this was a winner also. BIG congrats Again~~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 7/12/2014 10:59:00 PM
Richard, you described well an important aspect of life in your alliteration. Congrats
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Mohan.
Date: 7/12/2014 8:09:00 PM
WOW! Richard! congrats on a great win. Surprised not to see this one placed higher.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:34:00 AM
You are kind Arlene, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 7/12/2014 7:12:00 PM
Congrats on a great sexy write ....Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Seren.
Date: 7/12/2014 5:15:00 PM
Sizzling! Congratulations on your win, what a sensual poem. ;D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:35:00 AM
;0)
Date: 7/12/2014 2:15:00 PM
Hot sexy and watta alliteration! Like your m, o and s best!!:D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Olive, I really really liked yours.
Date: 7/12/2014 10:25:00 AM
This sizzles. Congratulations on a great win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Faye.
Date: 7/12/2014 10:05:00 AM
I am sucker for sultry smiles, sigh!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Abdul.
Date: 7/12/2014 10:02:00 AM
Nice win on your second offering....If you were in baseball you would be making a fortune...congrats Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I had forgotten I wrote Sonic Stings.
Date: 7/12/2014 8:52:00 AM
" hour on hour"..I cant imagine..lol...congrats on a very sexy win.BG
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2014 8:59:00 AM
Honestly exhausting but worth the effort *lol*
Date: 7/12/2014 6:16:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs JAN XX
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs back.
Date: 7/12/2014 5:12:00 AM
Enjoyed the sexy sultry smile, Richard and congrats on the win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 7/10/2014 8:51:00 PM
I just came from reading Casarahs poems, did someone slip some love potions into the Soup? LOL I am not to familiar with the form, but I loved the poem!!! Haven't been around as much, so hoping all is well you Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2014 7:09:00 AM
I for one am glad to see you back.
Date: 7/9/2014 2:02:00 PM
Nice Rick... Good first attempt... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2014 2:11:00 PM
Thanks again Verlena, I appreciate the visits.
Date: 7/6/2014 7:14:00 AM
Might be your first attempt, Richard, but I would be more than happy had I written it. gl in contest. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/12/2014 5:25:00 AM
...back again, this time with congratulations!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Paul. I am off to check out your work. I have been to busy so it will be nice to catch up.
Date: 7/6/2014 2:33:00 AM
Brilliant alliteration you've successfully created on first attempt my dear friend Richard. I like it. So honored to read one of your precious gems this afternoon. Thank u so much and good luck in the contest. love and big hugs, Leonora
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Leonora, a little luck is always welcome.
Date: 7/5/2014 10:33:00 PM
Well, you wrote it like a pro Richard! Excellent job! It is a great entry and sure to do well.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for the thoughtful visit Connie.
Date: 7/5/2014 8:20:00 PM
So sizzling so sexy, what woman would wish for wonderland like this, well we would know one:) great way to alliterate,:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 6:31:00 AM
I know of at least one guy as well. *lol*
Date: 7/5/2014 3:41:00 PM
I love your first attempt in aliteration..Exquisite and Intriguing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 6:34:00 AM
Thanks my dear, a smile and hug back to you.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/5/2014 3:42:00 PM
Exquisite I meant..Smiles ; )
Date: 7/5/2014 3:13:00 PM
Bet you have explored this form before but probably not on paper LOL Must say that you are inventive Hugs and Kisses Mamabear
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Date: 7/5/2014 3:05:00 PM
extremely sultry and sexy Richard. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/5/2014 9:45:00 AM
Nice first attempt.. very risqué ...Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Tim, it must be this Canadian air.
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