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Sex In a Parking Lot

demure pink panties orange in the glow of the streetlights d a n g l i n g from a petite cinnamon colored ankle the bronze back of ghetto lust flexes and glistens above the writhing form of sensuality incarnate battle of the sexes the incubus versus the succubus in a seventy-four chevy write your name on the window has you pass by

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Charlene Bird

Date: 4/18/2009 8:20:00 PM

Hot!!! An exciting moment intertwined in the back seat of a classic! Great piece

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/18/2009 7:06:00 PM

Steamy write and great imagery.

Robin Maughan

Date: 4/18/2009 7:00:00 PM

Vivid.. I have been dangling before... awesome write Hugs, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2009 9:18:00 AM

Very tantalizing poem, Brian! The image is so erotic and described so vividly that the reader can see it clearly. Love the reference to writing "your name on the window." Steamy windows are a sign of heated passion inside the '74 Chevy. Love it! Carolyn

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 4/18/2009 7:49:00 AM

very creative my friend and sexy imagery. Nothing like the thrill of outdoor lust..... ANIMALS!! lol.

Kat Crane

Date: 4/18/2009 6:49:00 AM

I saw the title of this and I knew it was yours, before I saw your name. Amazing again!

Daver Austin

Date: 4/18/2009 6:26:00 AM

I'm too wasted to even write my name. This stirred the old bones unto exhaustion. SCORCH! Love, daver

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/18/2009 5:46:00 AM

Are you freaking kidding me brother? how amazing is this read? you have took this to another level with your brillance.. the last line is a knockout....terrific write.