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The heavy musk of cheap Colon wiggled round my nose, like a carousel. It was stained of your clothes, that were laying right there, off of you. My thirsty fingers drank your skin, rushing endlessly over and over it again, every sappy sip leaving a sweet addiction for more. I felt your teeth sink into my lips, your hunger grew to the point of no control. You heard my cries under the muffle of soundproof walls. Calling out for more of you to be induced into my body. The sheets ran red with sin, our bodies rattling to over gratified nerves,. Our sweat dripping the heavy words of amity and banishment of innocence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 9:21:00 PM
The title intrigued me and I had to read it. I'm so glad I did. Excellent Poem. Thank you for your comment. This reminds me of one of mine "Sweet Moments of Passion". Robin
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:47:00 PM
very passionate.. hot... heavy with steamy emotion.. well done... constance
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Date: 10/24/2008 10:31:00 PM
one of a kind! smoothe!
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Date: 10/22/2008 7:00:00 PM
This is a very passionate piece. I like the flow of the words and the message. The images are certainly one to consider. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/20/2008 10:17:00 PM
Whoa! Great poem, Jamie! You had me hooked from the first line to the last! Lonnie
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