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Sex Change

There was a gigolo who swallowed a bee It pained him from stomach to knee. But with a shout and curse He saw things get worse. It buzzed him from a he to a she.

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Thabang Ngoma

Date: 1/7/2015 6:01:00 PM

Hi Paul...felt the sting right at the end, funny, witty...rgds, Thabang

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/8/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thank you, Thabang. I value and appreciate you supportive comments, and I'm pleased that the limerick gave you a laugh or two.

Renee Muravez

Date: 1/5/2015 8:54:00 PM

twisted... I like it.. I'm renee (:

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, Renee, for your comment. What makes limericks so much fun (as you already know) is that the composer can be as twisted as his/her creativity will permit.

David Fisher

Date: 1/5/2015 7:27:00 PM

Ouch, in a funny way, Paul. Saw the title and knew there was a funny story to it!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 9:46:00 PM

What you say demonstrates the importance of titles (so it seems to me). However, not everyone is as perceptive as you. In any event, I value and appreciate your thoughtful comment.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 1/5/2015 2:55:00 PM

He lost his stinger...??? Funny limerick!!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 3:11:00 PM

That appears to have been the case. Thanks for stopping by; I appreciate it.

John Fleming

Date: 1/5/2015 11:08:00 AM

Still grinning, Paul...Lol!! :) john.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2015 2:44:00 PM

Thank you, John. And I'm still in awe of "Christmas Night Reflections."

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/4/2015 10:52:00 PM

Excellent pen Paul! I really enjoyed your very funny Limerick my very dear friend. ha ha ha lol...Sure you made me laugh and smile with this one. You're very good with these limericks.I wish you the best in 2015! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/4/2015 11:08:00 PM

Dorian, You're so wonderfully supportive. Please know how much I appreciate and value your comments. To you and your loved ones: Every good wish for a magnificent 2015, including the continuance of your exquisite poetic voice.