Sex

So divinely exhilarating, yet Exhausting and contorting - X-rated gymnastics!

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Farah Chamma

Date: 1/11/2009 10:24:00 AM

hahah... I shall remain silent

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/6/2008 7:20:00 AM

lol! Great acrostic! Thank you so much for your comments on my poem "Lament of the Philosopher's Hound"... I'm not sure what breed the dog in the poem is, although it must certainly be a special one! lol I just imagined that he was rather regal in bearing, and definitely quite intelligent, reading poetry on the sly when no one is looking. ~Juliane

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/4/2008 9:00:00 AM

great acrostic . well written with lots of truth.........:-)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/4/2008 7:06:00 AM

Yep...that pretty much describes it......and isn't it rather funny when you think of it. Like it was God's little joke when he created mankind??!! This was a fun poem...but right on target!! ~ Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/4/2008 6:31:00 AM

goodness, I hope you did some good, stretches before attempting these acrobatics - man, should a man your age be swinging by the chandeliers, or what? lol just joking, thanks for the laugh, love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/4/2008 6:19:00 AM

Muahahahahaha! It's Christy's comment that is cracking me up! Hope you are ok after such strenuous exercise. : ) Hey, it's your poem! ~lol~ Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/4/2008 4:17:00 AM

Lol. It is very filling my friend. This poem is done well. Love the last line. Chris

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/4/2008 4:16:00 AM

Before any exercise, you better talk with your doctor, especially the last line kind......always, Christy