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Seventeen

Tell me, can you tell that I'm only seventeen weary seventeen

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/20/2012 5:33:00 AM

Sweet seventeen ! Well done haiku Rachel. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

James Peranteau

Date: 4/19/2012 7:08:00 PM

Well dear poet; I'll have to read more of your writes sometime, and I'll get back to ya with an opinion ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Rachel....much love, james

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/19/2012 4:31:00 PM

Oh those days have long since'd past for this gentleman but I do rather the journey back through your words. Nice Haiku Rachel!..:JP]

Jared Pickett
Date: 4/19/2012 4:32:00 PM

"I do rather enjoy the journey back."