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Sevenbits--Nature

Thunder growls beneath fired sky Crackling its way down street wires As booms pound on our ceiling. Forceful winds roughen wheezed noise In a pitch quite deafening While we huddle together; Enjoying silent movies. SEVENBITS Contest hosted by nette onclaud 10.02.2017

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Date: 10/24/2017 4:54:00 PM
Oh....how clever! I like this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/8/2017 8:32:00 PM
Wow, you really set the scene . I can really imagine this in the storm. Congrats on first place.
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:15:00 AM
Franco - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Date: 10/8/2017 2:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Franco.
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations Franco on your excellent win with this fantastic write!
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Franco, fabulous write.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/7/2017 5:01:00 PM
Hi Franco, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:40:00 PM
Franco, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:40:00 PM
ohh, i didn't see that twist coming, and ' silent' movies at that... big cheers for garnering a top win, franco, and thanks for participating... huggs
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:00:00 PM
What a nice craft! Franco. Best wishes in the contest.
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