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Seven Days Who Knows

Seven days it was so long ago Your loving heart you then did show Seven days it seems eternity That you gave all of your love to me. Seven days for you to understand You hold my trust in the palm of your hand Seven days how long the days do seem Was it all in a seven day dream? A dream or a fantasy who does know Seven days and my love for you does still grow A love gift from where it came who knows Who knows from whence loves wind blows. Who knows how the heart it does entrap Who know why our lives do overlap Who knows where these things will end Seven days and my love I will still send. A day for a year a year for a day That what the Bible in scripture does say So seven days or seven years, numbers count not As every ounce of my love you have now got © ~GG~ 22/01/2013

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Date: 1/22/2013 11:18:00 PM
I see your romantic side, well done.
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Date: 1/22/2013 1:51:00 PM
Hey There Goldie re:syllables in haiku just stay 17 [short/long/short] or under and you'll be OK the syllable count actually isn't as important as the sensory content & 2 part structure..Light & Love you ole romantic you!
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Date: 1/22/2013 1:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetic romantic work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:16:00 AM
Beautiful poem here Mandy.Lovely read.
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:36:00 AM
your fantasies are so real, golden girl, but this wonderful poetry is becoming your trademark,, a sign of truly a awesome poet which many of us only know to well... i just love this,, especially as one tends to feel each and every word you pen...
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Date: 1/22/2013 8:33:00 AM
This is a brilliant and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this fascinating poem of love this morning! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!
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