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Seven Days

seven days a week... the intervals in between can shape twilight into scented ambrosia and turn noontime to boiled potion of tan, dusk smears the sky darkening bronze while an eve, a textured chameleon... the shrill and serenity of minutes can blaze the air with time's ecstasy or numb the splintered liver of pain's regret. are these days that pour of subway’s sweat, then emboss night with a vault of celibate, white stars? coffee and newspaper expire as the hours dwindle into clockwork ticks. and hands cradle an endless space bathed in the moist kiss of dawnbreak floating on a veil graced by life's alchemy, unbidden... seven days a week: a deep hole lost in a melee between men and beasts, defining not the terms and conditions of human traces that linger or stain the lines of meridians blending haste with pace? there are no answers, i just wade like a child becoming a fetus without all these adult specs rendering white stars,celibate... in seven days a week. Space and Time Contest new poem use of small caps is intentional 2/12/2014

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Date: 2/23/2014 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win Nette,have a lovely Sunday.
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Date: 2/22/2014 8:02:00 PM
Nette, a nice win...SKAt
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:14:00 PM
Nette I truly enjoyed "Seven Days". Fantastic poetry. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/22/2014 9:45:00 AM
It often seems as if week after week, we simply exist in that deep hole lost. It is up to us to step aside, and look, breathe in, live outside the frenzy...in a world such as this,, it can be a hard thing to do. A good reminder is your poem! Great introspection!
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Date: 2/22/2014 9:26:00 AM
Nette this is seven days of splendor, congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2014 3:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Space and Time . Congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 2/22/2014 3:15:00 AM
Good work Nette... Enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 2/13/2014 8:50:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this, Nette. Your most interesting play on words kept me entranced. Thank you for entertaining me this morning with you wonderful poetry.
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Date: 2/12/2014 6:42:00 PM
A poem that is a gift from above,definitely a heavenly dew, rejoice nette that the message is passed through you. Remain anointed angel of God.
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Date: 2/12/2014 5:03:00 PM
This write is full of grandiose images, ones that seven days a week can emphasize completely! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, you have done masterfully with this incredible poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 2:48:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Seven days a week can become blended all into one rutt..Thanks for the visit to my page..We are expecting more icing this evening when the sun drops with it the thermometer..Sara
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Date: 2/12/2014 1:58:00 PM
Definitely filled with the many nuggets of moments in just a week. Great mystical images and the effect, softy dramatic.Thank you for an award in your contest, Nette.
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Date: 2/12/2014 1:31:00 PM
- May all seven days of the week be a party and enjoy ... (my day are: headache) - Must sign off the pc ..... can not bear to read more poems today ... : ( - Hope your day / evening will be fine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2014 1:25:00 PM
I was immersed in another realm, far from my own world, for a week that seemed like eternity.Overwhelming how you can expand boundaries of time with living metaphors!
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Date: 2/12/2014 12:56:00 PM
I loved this nette I'm celibate too . Thanks for sharing Daz
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