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Setbacks

What setbacks greater are, in a married life, than infidelity! Date:10/07/16 Contest: Setbacks

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Daniel Turner

Date: 7/10/2016 7:21:00 PM

This is really good Sunita. These short forms are extremely difficult for me but you have done very well. Good luck in contest!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/11/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thanks lot Daniel, never mind it was not placed but was glad to have tried this form and that you have appreciated it! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2016 5:24:00 PM

this is one of the best I have seen so far, it's closer to the true form of senryu (mine for this contest certainly was not!)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/11/2016 11:11:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, you like it. It was a first attempt, a motivation to write for contests here. Congrats my dear, yours was indeed good. I could not have ventured more than the 17 words, frankly! :D

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/10/2016 4:08:00 PM

Very powerful, Sunita. So much said in your ten words...the greatest setback of all. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/11/2016 11:13:00 AM

Ya my dear, unfortunately...:) Thanks for appreciating it.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/10/2016 12:35:00 AM

My first attempt at this form...hope it is good! :) Sunita.