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Set You Free

You make me laugh, You make cry, You make my heart skip a beat, Even though you don’t try, I really can’t imagine, Living my life without you, Our little girl would be sad, And I would be too, You say you want out, So I will set you free, I feel I have no other choice, It will be just her and me, I’m sorry for all the hurt, And also for the pain, At one point we were happy, I wish things had stayed the same, I wish you all the best, And a happy life too, But just remember, We will always love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 5:28:00 PM
Cute poem Alexandra. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:37:00 PM
Alexandra , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:25:00 PM
Hi Alexandra, love this one , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/29/2013 2:35:00 PM
Welcome, having just gone through this I like the positive note. Keep putting it out there!
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Date: 8/29/2013 1:18:00 PM
Been there...more times than I cared to. Thankfully, I'm way past that pain now. This was well expressed. Nice work!
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:53:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Alexandra ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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