Set Men Free

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Written in response to Debbie's contest..May be an entry..

B.C. was two-thousand-eleven years ago A.D. was the start that set men free For Christ came as permanent blood flow B.C. was two-thousand-eleven years ago He set us free from bondage you see Perfect lamb sacrifice for you and me B.C. was two-thousand-eleven years ago A.D. was the start to set men free The poem is about A.D.... The time when Jesus came to earth to teach men a better way and to be a permanent sacrifice for man...

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Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/17/2011 10:51:00 AM

Wow! Powerful and inspirational write Sara. Love the refrains and I love your poetic math! I love this piece!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2011 2:03:00 AM

A very strong poem Sara,. How are you? Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening. God bless & take care,..Linda

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2011 10:43:00 PM

Very nicely done...great Tiolet! It flowed very well! Great work Sara!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2011 10:10:00 PM

great way to do AD, Sara. Good going on your practice with triolet form too.

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/12/2011 5:26:00 PM

Great to read Sara..a 7

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 5:23:00 PM

lovely use of the form expressing the message in this beautiful poetry Sara.. good luck in the contest bringing life to B.C. and A.D. both.. I also wrote about B.C.. in my entry..luv..