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Set Free

When i look into your eyes theirs nothing that i see nothing but my own mistakes looking back at me so now we are at the end time to leave the world of pretend welcome to reality where everyone puts doubt in me for all the failures i made now all these bad thought make their raid when i look into your eyes their is nothing i see nothing but the failure of life being set free now life has halted and the story is exalted of the boy who was treated like nothing more and was stepped on like he was the floor now i look into your eyes still theirs nothing i see nothing but the past coming back to haunt me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 9:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative write tonight..hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:41:00 PM
first of all, WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP. this was a very sad and tender write. Coming from your heart.
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:49:00 PM
Very sad, touchy and moving write, dennis
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