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The lost little Angel was fell into the urban slums Walking aimlessly with nothing but her broken wings Blossom into granules of dusts, intangible as a vagabond Her heaven plucked as the moonlight stolen, the intangible vagabond Her sanctity made her glowed illuminate those souls who ingested by the slums However flagellation in disguise filled the story of her wonderful flawed wings Trace stitches by stitches of her wings Her world plays deception in those eyes who marked her as a vagabond In fact she just an imperfect little Angel and they are the slums Rose from the slums, the wings tore the shield of a vagabond ****************************************************************** Honorable mention Introducing Tritina (a new poetry form for you!) Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 4/10/2013 8:40:00 AM
Dropping by to say hello. I hope you had a wonderful day Yanny.
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:40:00 PM
HI YANNY, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:47:00 AM
yanny congrats on your win....David
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/10/2013 8:19:00 AM
Thank you David :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/10/2013 12:28:00 AM
Yanny, your story in this poem is beautiful. I marked it down for the lines being overly long. Otherwise, it was wonderful. Congrats for the HM.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/10/2013 8:45:00 AM
I just changed the ending, hopefully this is already correct, thank you for the input Andrea :D hug, yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/10/2013 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, next time I will try to do better, thank you for your input, enjoyed to join in your challenging contest :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/3/2013 10:28:00 PM
Good morning Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/3/2013 10:31:00 PM
Good morning Rick :D thank you for stopping by :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
You've got a way with words! This piece was very captivating, and so interesting. I'm sure many of us can come up with different interpretations. Always, Laura
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/3/2013 10:30:00 PM
Thank you Laura :D your words really uplifting :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/27/2013 8:54:00 AM
Hi Yanny, all done with my poem
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Date: 2/27/2013 8:32:00 AM
Some are fallen angels this I do believe.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/27/2013 8:35:00 AM
Thank you John, your words really uplifting :D glad to have a visit by you, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/27/2013 8:17:00 AM
Yanny, very well written poem. The words were arranged so beautifully.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/27/2013 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Abigale, pleasure to have a visit by you :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/22/2013 3:09:00 PM
Angels walk amongst us! You never know when you are entertaining an angel. Lovely poem Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2013 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, I hope you had a lovely day.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/22/2013 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Rick, what a lovely eye, deep like an ocean bluish like a sky :) wishing you a wonderful day Rick :) - hug, yanny
Date: 2/22/2013 11:01:00 AM
The finest poem I've read here in a long Yanny, it is GORGEOUS! - Thank you dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/22/2013 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Anne, this is my first attempt of this format, glad that you like it :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/22/2013 1:03:00 AM
wow, wow, wow Yanny..you just made my day...i loove it:-)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/22/2013 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Word Craft,your comment also made my day :) wishing you a great day :D - hug,yanny

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