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Sestina

Life is a mystery, life is a dream But let me tell you something about life Things never happen the way you’d expect I talk of mothers who are expecting Yet they are killing another child’s dream Then would expect the best of their child’s life I have seen many evils in my life Of all these the worst would be to expect To attain great success by crushing dreams Dreams of those whose life we expect to bloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/12/2013 3:12:00 AM
I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to post a comment, thanks, it really means a lot. I want to say thanks especially to Angela, who organized the tiritina competition and gave me the chance to try new form of poetry (tritina and sestina) Thanks everyone.
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:39:00 PM
ELIZABETH, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Elizabeth Edemode
Date: 3/12/2013 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 3/10/2013 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Elizabeth. cheers! :)
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Elizabeth Edemode
Date: 3/12/2013 3:06:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/10/2013 7:45:00 AM
Elizabeth congrats on your win, a hard hitting true message...David
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Elizabeth Edemode
Date: 3/12/2013 3:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 3/10/2013 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations in my tritina contest, Elizabeth. I appreciate your support and hope you will try this form again!
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Elizabeth Edemode
Date: 3/12/2013 3:08:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 2/14/2013 3:54:00 AM
Such a great piece ... luv it.
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Elizabeth Edemode
Date: 3/12/2013 3:07:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and thanks also for giving me my first comment on this site.

Book: Shattered Sighs