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Serious trouble is prowling. There’s snow, mew-mew meowing. Those steel-blue eyes, mesmerizing. Serious trouble is prowling. His tail’s not tucked between his legs - Stands up like a towering keg. In his haunt, he’ll never beg. His tail’s not tucked between his legs. Trouble’s whiskers, like a great ‘stache. Fur looks pettable, but claws clash. The calico cat - would-be ash. Trouble’s whiskers, like a great ‘stache. Snow’s low-down, to the ground, alone, and doesn’t want his cover blown. He eats and reaps the seeds he’s sown. Snow’s low-down, to the ground, alone. The girl called him “Snow” - he’s “Trouble.” He turned the household to rubble. Was kicked out of cash-cow bubble. The girl called him “Snow” - he’s “Trouble.” Don’t feel sorry - keep up your guard. He’ll lie his way into your yard. A shark, remember he plays cards. Don’t feel sorry - keep up your guard. Serious trouble is prowling. There’s snow, mew-mew meowing. Those steel-blue eyes, mesmerizing. Serious trouble is prowling. 10/20/2022

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Date: 10/25/2022 6:53:00 PM
LOL. Cats may be my favorite creatures. They have such personalities! Love his poem Kim :)
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Date: 10/22/2022 10:27:00 PM
My goodness, what a pretty little bundle of trouble! One wouldn't think it to see him! I loved this suspenseful poem! I was thinking when I saw this, aw, I want a cat!! But then you made me double-guess myself...maybe not this one!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2022 10:51:00 AM
LOL! Love your comment! Thanks, BJ!
Date: 10/21/2022 8:38:00 PM
The image of the cat like a ball of wool with its tail not tucked between its legs and the poem on it are equally mesmerizing, Kim....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2022 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 10/21/2022 4:16:00 AM
Wow! Perfect, mesmerizing poetry. A POTD from me, anyway. "Those steel-blue eyes, mesmerizing. Serious trouble is prowling." It is tempting to kick them out...but then the meowing turns to purring...steel eyes become more endearing than threatening~ I'm a sucker I know.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment, Joe! Made me smile :)
Date: 10/20/2022 8:51:00 PM
E is for Excellent. B is for Beyond. That's what this poem is, Beyond Excellent! Love it. ~ Felix and Tabby
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Felix and Tabby! :)
Date: 10/20/2022 8:19:00 PM
Lovely write, kim. Many blessing my friend from all of Halloween.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! Be blessed!
Date: 10/20/2022 4:11:00 PM
Kim, Your writing is fairly flawless, and the content shows that you have a deep understanding of the topic at hand. How adorable is it that a poem that really should have been called Trouble?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! :)
Date: 10/20/2022 1:05:00 PM
so cute about a poem who ought to have been names Trouble. Do you have such a cat as this? they are out there!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 2:42:00 PM
No, just came to me when I saw this photo (pixabay) Thank you :)
Date: 10/20/2022 11:59:00 AM
Hello Kim, My Patch Tabby is adorable. So far so good she does not get into trouble. She is an indoor cat. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2022 10:48:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Oh I will. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2022 3:13:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh I will. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 12:56:00 PM
Cuddle up :) (hugs)
Date: 10/20/2022 10:44:00 AM
At least he takes care of you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 12:55:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/20/2022 10:02:00 AM
Trouble is an adorable name for that little cutie. I had a Himalayan who looked exactly like this one. She was a sweetheart, but sometimes got into trouble, too. Love this one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thanks, Jenna! :)

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