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Serious Look

S o dispassionate I have BECOME E ager voices of people made me NUMB R ambling tales of them just gave BOREDOM I to restore my faith, still silently seek FREEDOM O ffshore built my own little place to avoid any BOTHERSOME U nafraid, un-argued, unasked, un-broken, ah my own solemn KINGDOM S lowly turning in to an old soul though LONESOME L ooking in the mirror, irking on lost SARCASM O ver-busied, I made my mind, being DEFEATISM, O f peace I only yearn and restore gone OPTIMISM K nowingly of serious look wore, but still don’t know, why feelings are FEARSOME

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/16/2014 9:35:00 PM

Sometimes, when we search so passionately for solitude, we end up finding ourselves alone by abandoning those we loved.... You did an amazing job with this rhyming acrostic poem! You are a very talented writer, Hina! Keep up the great work!

Hina Nasir
Date: 7/17/2014 8:05:00 AM

THANKS A lot ... Kelly .. you are right but being a pessimist ..it seems the only option for me.. this is my first acrostic poem and i was very excited about it ..thanks alot for appreciating ..seriously ! :-)