Serenity and Sexiness

The warming glow that brings my heart abloom, A fireplace with silent flickering My passions flowing in a low-lit room, Oh, take my pen and write, muse whispering. Soft, quiet thoughts embracing songs, consume. Engrossed, dramatic shadows shimmering. Endorphins gleaning precious words, oh soul – Serenity and sexiness made whole. © February 6, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: SEXY! Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/13/2012 9:53:00 AM

Wonderful write, congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2012 10:33:00 PM

now this kind of heightened mood so gently yet subtly expressed is so sexy, dane... congrats on your win in my contest! :)huggs!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/11/2012 1:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Nette for choosing my poem for such a high honor. And your comment really made my day. It made me feel special. So, thank you very much for that, too.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/10/2012 3:09:00 PM

Ohhh yes Danie lovely meter too! Someones very lucky Light & Love & Congrad's

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/10/2012 12:56:00 PM

Nice write,beautiful form,Dane.As passion flows in a low-lit room,oh soul-serenity and sexiness made whole.....I love this lines...Congrats on your win,Dane.You deserved it.......