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Serene

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Serene

captivated and held
hostage by the
setting of the sun

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  1. Date: 12/28/2008 1:13:00 PM
    Very nice unique imagery! Thanks for your comments and reading my work. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:01:00 PM
    Pretty scene. My daughter and I would sit on the boardwalk in Virginia Beach and watch that sun set over the horizon. I miss those days. Vince

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 3:13:00 PM
    Beautiful Haiku Deneen. There are wonderful sunsets here in Tuscany, but not this week, unfortunately. Your write has enabled me to watch the sun set despite the incessant wind and rain! Happy Halloween. Love, Nigel

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 3:57:00 PM
    ohhh, ive been in that setting and its breathtaking. Very nicely put.

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 7:40:00 AM
    I love the sun and the warmth of it all and your poem placed my mind in a summer state. Wish the sun and its warmth was still with us.

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 5:50:00 AM
    Oh brilliant! Has happened to me many times. So well written. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/29/2008 4:49:00 AM
    A perfect haiku, one of the best I've read. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 7:59:00 PM
    Wonderful feeling you put me in with this excellent write. Blessings Michael

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 6:30:00 PM
    Yes...I have been captivated many, many times! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 6:08:00 PM
    Deneen your smoking ~what an excellent Haiku you created!!!! I love it! Laura :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 5:58:00 PM
    Sunsets mesmerize me also....you have described the feeling quite expressively. Love, Sara