Serene

captivated and held hostage by the setting of the sun

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/28/2008 1:13:00 PM

Very nice unique imagery! Thanks for your comments and reading my work. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/1/2008 7:01:00 PM

Pretty scene. My daughter and I would sit on the boardwalk in Virginia Beach and watch that sun set over the horizon. I miss those days. Vince

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/31/2008 3:13:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Deneen. There are wonderful sunsets here in Tuscany, but not this week, unfortunately. Your write has enabled me to watch the sun set despite the incessant wind and rain! Happy Halloween. Love, Nigel

Lena W

Date: 10/29/2008 3:57:00 PM

ohhh, ive been in that setting and its breathtaking. Very nicely put.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/29/2008 7:40:00 AM

I love the sun and the warmth of it all and your poem placed my mind in a summer state. Wish the sun and its warmth was still with us.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/29/2008 5:50:00 AM

Oh brilliant! Has happened to me many times. So well written. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 10/29/2008 4:49:00 AM

A perfect haiku, one of the best I've read. Love, daver

Michael Torres

Date: 10/28/2008 7:59:00 PM

Wonderful feeling you put me in with this excellent write. Blessings Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/28/2008 6:30:00 PM

Yes...I have been captivated many, many times! ~ Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/28/2008 6:08:00 PM

Deneen your smoking ~what an excellent Haiku you created!!!! I love it! Laura :)

Sara Lokken

Date: 10/28/2008 5:58:00 PM

Sunsets mesmerize me also....you have described the feeling quite expressively. Love, Sara