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Seren Ah but what a radiant lass Blonde and soft and born with class Nightingale and nursing the unborn Her heart is wrapped around all the forlorn Loving animals As only a Star knows Her smile is soft and always glows Cuddles and cwtch by the river that flows Ah but one you see… says she’s crass Now who says that to a beautiful lass? Little man with ego bruised Shall we buy you manners or remove your shoes? Some in this world are sad and mean They toss out bitterness, they so keen The reaper one day shall even the score Stars shall shine, as we slaughter the boar Angels and Stars way up high Their beauty we admire up in the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2016 8:17:00 AM
Without going into the merits or non-merits of bullying, I have to agree that the tribute to Seren is beautiful. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:26:00 AM
Seren is indeed a beauty inside and out..
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Date: 10/22/2016 7:51:00 PM
Hi Arthur, This is a good tribute to a awesome poetess. Bullying of any kind is just not right:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/22/2016 5:28:00 PM
Oh my, that's nice of you to write lovely things about me. Those who seek should curb their rudeness, shows the signs of a weak personality surmountable to how a bully behaves. Thank you all for your kind words.....Seren
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to a beautiful and most talented poetess. I have seen no reason why anybody should bully her. I hope such has stopped...
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Date: 10/17/2016 6:09:00 PM
this is really sweet and appears to be a tribute to Seren. I did not realize she had been bullied. Shame on whoever did that to her. And great of you to write this poem for her!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:10:00 PM
She is much like you a sweetie! Thank you!
Date: 10/17/2016 10:21:00 AM
Lovely thoughts for Seren. Bullies don't care who they attack. It is not the words you use that define you but your actions.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:09:00 PM
Its sad he doesn't realize that, instead he accuses others of his own behavior, might be related to Trump! LOL
Date: 10/17/2016 7:14:00 AM
Beautiful ... Very lovely ...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Probir I am sure she will love the comments.
Date: 10/17/2016 1:37:00 AM
A lovely tribute, Arthur. Regards, Viv
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thanks Viv she is one classy lady!
Date: 10/16/2016 10:16:00 PM
lovely tribute to Seren:-) cwtch Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:06:00 PM
She is a sweet kind woman, too bad she came across Donald T Trump! LOL

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