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Sequidilla No 1

No one about, the rain on cobblestones glistened. Scavenging cat stalked close by l stopped and listened. Pain pierced my heart. I was standing , where we had decided to part. Contest: Sequidilla by Nette Onclaud I used number1 Penned 14 September 2017 Syllables checked

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2017 9:24:00 PM

Now that I brought the limes!!!, this is a fav seren, loved this poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2017 5:51:00 PM

a lovely interpretation of the image Seren:-) good luck in the contest:-0 hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2017 8:44:00 PM

A wonderful write Seren. Lovely and tender. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2017 3:15:00 AM

Thank u Susan....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 1:15:00 PM

What a brilliantly, well-written write! A sad poem, but I loved it! You created a grandiose piece from that picture Nette had on the contest page, awesome inspiration! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem here this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2017 3:15:00 AM

Hi Russell you are so kind....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 9/14/2017 11:55:00 AM

I'm inquiring about the tequila...you must have misspelled the sign out front...seriously...great poem

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2017 3:18:00 AM

Sorry no Tequilla forgot to buy limes....Seren