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Sequence-Passing Seasons

Spring watches a flower- August a moon- as Fall dresses scarlet red- winter silent calls Note seen with Japanese haiku eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/5/2009 5:15:00 PM
Brian this one is really exceptional. Very nice very clever. Liked it alot. GBU Michael
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Date: 1/4/2009 7:18:00 AM
Amazing. Going through the seasons with such poetic talent. Truly brilliant. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/4/2009 4:09:00 AM
Amazing! Wow, this is so gentle and birlliant, and is going into my favorites. what a beauty here, Brian! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/4/2009 1:42:00 AM
Grat work Brian, the seasons are beautifully felt...Raul
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