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Sequence-Legacy

Our fragrance lingers on within those we rear, sweet smelling, if in God we fear- and above hovering, blessing as a dove, our bios dissipates- into those we love

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 7:29:00 AM

Continuity ... poets call it flow ... lovers call it "my" ... an existential urge in the poet ... echoing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/17/2009 11:53:00 AM

Brian, I love this poem. it's going to my favorites. Sweetness exudes within these words. You have captured the essence of our hope- to live on in the minds of future generations and thus, influence them. Love, DAS-J (PS-Thanks for your contest. Words have been flowing. My goal=365.)

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/17/2009 8:55:00 AM

With God's blessing...may be only pass down the best of what we are. Lovely poem, Brain! ~ Love, Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/17/2009 8:52:00 AM

Wow, i love the trickledown effect, in both lyric and form. I bow to you, Sir Brian. love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/17/2009 6:38:00 AM

Aw, truly beautiful. Just love your poetry. Deeply inspirational. Love, Shar

Diane Christian

Date: 5/17/2009 5:01:00 AM

so sweet, may the fragrance of Jesus continue to grow through generation to generation, A super write i can smell the beauty in the words like sweet sweet flowers, God bless you from diane