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September's Perfume

Whisper sweet the words of September land softly on the times we remember Haunting scent of faint elder perfume still lingers on the aging bloom.

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Melisha Kaur

Date: 9/19/2015 3:33:00 PM

Short and elegant, loved it!

Sharon Gulley
Date: 9/21/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the sweet comment, Melisha. Have a beautiful week....Sharon

Franklin Price

Date: 9/15/2015 11:04:00 PM

This more of a couplet than a Haiku. Very enjoyable. I can see the and smell the bloom.

Sharon Gulley
Date: 11/30/2015 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Franklin so very much for the information you have shared and for the sweet comment on this write. Have a blessed day.....Sharon : )

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/15/2015 3:29:00 PM

Haiku is of 575 syllables, my lovely friend. I too at the beginning done as you. Whatever that may be, your poem is very nice and enjoyed well. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Sharon Gulley
Date: 11/30/2015 9:10:00 PM

Hello BL, so very nice to hear from you. You are correct and thank you for mentioning it to me, always appreciated. Thank you also for the sweet comments on this write. Hugs Sharon : )

Sharon Gulley

Date: 9/13/2015 7:35:00 AM

Not sure if this could be a haiku or not.