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"septembers Pearl"

Passing through this cardio ghettos carbon life Touching tawnies matrix of perennial painted times.... Escaping now unto a passage forged afore my sight Matinees in brilliant shining omni light as this A morning boulevards tranquility sunrise ~ Tracing trails upon the walls within its wake Sapient calling from such peaceful depths Deep inside, vitrifications resolve; chains disolved amid Freedoms reflective blue sky glass.... Chandeliers which glitter beyond the mundane Ushering in Shangrilas sweetened dreams ~ More precious this Shepherdess than that of, a priceless ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ...."Septembers Pearl"

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Date: 1/18/2011 1:30:00 PM
I like the transition from the mundane "carbon life" to the brilliant world that lies beyond. Reading this poem is almost like stepping into heaven for a brief glimpse, John. Beautifully written! And thank you for your sweet comments on my haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 11:18:00 AM
John you have the most wonderful heart dear friend. Thank you again for your always kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:13:00 PM
I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments John. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:58:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:54:00 PM
LOL!!! "Cardio ghetto carbon life"!! You're too much John Rhinem... If I'm interpreting this correctly, I am happy that all is well; the chains disolved away! Beautiful! Even if your name wasn't on this page it would still scream, "John" Have a very good evening, my friend. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:22:00 PM
simply stunning and beautiful...love 'freedoms reflective blue sky glass'... september is my birth month ~ smile ~
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