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September Slip

I married one September morn: a day I surely won't forget (each time I think about my wife, I break into a clammy sweat...) LOL, loosely based on reality - written 19th September for Andrea's contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2022 7:04:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2022 10:22:00 AM

Hey Jack! This is whimsy wrapped up in laughter! Definitely fun! Congratulations on your win! Thanks for the chuckle.

Ann Peck

Date: 9/25/2022 3:45:00 PM

Ha Jack, You're too funny. You'd better eat this poem before your wife finds it! :) Congratulations on First Place!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/25/2022 2:34:00 AM

I too would have placed you high on the winners' list, Jack!! After such a slip one tends to tread more carefully. Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/24/2022 3:06:00 PM

Congratulatiions, Jack: on your top placement. very humorous….SuZ

Joseph May

Date: 9/24/2022 4:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win with with this humorous write

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/24/2022 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations Jack! Clever "September Slip"....Lol! :)Paulette

Terry Miller

Date: 9/24/2022 12:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this humorous poem

John Watt

Date: 9/23/2022 8:56:00 PM

Jack, isn't that every married man's nightmare: waking up the day after the forgotten anniversary and realizing it Is. Too. Late. Congrats on the #1 spot with this fun write ~ John

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2022 7:56:00 PM

Dear Jack, your fun wonderful humor shines.. Thanks for the lol this evening! Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 7:43:00 PM

Absolutely hilarious, Jack. LOVE This. BIG congrats in my contest.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/20/2022 10:44:00 PM

So much heartfelt reasoning in there, Jack. Stay well my friend. Harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2022 12:28:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. A date you probably would not want to remember anymore. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara