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September Remembered

Scent of fall whispers on the wind Evenings lengthen as days drift by Pace slows down as Summer wanes Trees, russet and gold, start their display Embroidered sweaters hold back the gentle chill Mornings fresh perfume embraces Blue skies give way to wispy clouds Earth cradles the sleeping Spring time bulbs Rebirth of memories from Autumn's past For the contest; Fall Is Around The Corner Sponsored by Carol Brown Placement: 1st

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Date: 9/8/2011 10:59:00 PM
A delicious description of fall. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:08:00 PM
congrats on the big win!! Enjoyed it and enjoy the win.
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Paula
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:37:00 PM
Many congrats to you, Paula : )
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:24:00 PM
Just stellar, Paula. You captured the best of September in so few words. Congrats on the win! Bravo! Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:03:00 PM
a wonder of a write with top recogniction, paula...… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:58:00 PM
This is magical, Paula. You had me dreaming with the first line..."scent of fall whispers on the wind." Here in the South we don't get much wind unless a storm is approaching, but there is a nice seabreeze. The "gentle chill" begins in December. Magnificent description throughout. Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:51:00 PM
hey Paula congrats on your win,..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:15:00 AM
It pleasures me to see your beauty in first place Pauly. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congrats Paula on first place win with this cool write on Fall my friend.. luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:22:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 7:26:00 AM
Love this time of year. You've captured it so well in this acrostic. Best wishes for the contest Em :)
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Date: 8/31/2011 1:59:00 AM
Lovely poem, good luck in the contest, reads like a winner to me. Lee
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