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September Leave

It was good, together, with all of us You and me, nothing held in reserve We talked, argued and cried Laughed and swore, in love and anger Nights and days, sleeping or standing Close and aways, no longer alone Lae, Goroka and Simbu, pictures and stories For show and tell, muggy warm, wet cold Bright sunlit days, overcast and windy Sleepy long bus rides, tiring walks Short tempers, long apologies Hands as instruments hurt, healed and held Far far away now, but still holding me close. user name: mt motif: romantic

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Date: 10/25/2014 12:03:00 AM
Excellent romantic piece! Lovely! I can see why it is a winner. Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 2/2/2014 11:54:00 AM
I see it won. BIG congrats.
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Michael Dom
Date: 2/4/2014 10:17:00 PM
hey Andrea, September is a different kind of month for me. cheers.
Date: 2/2/2014 11:54:00 AM
wow, many emotions packed into this month. It is MY month. of my birth. and I love it. The ending part about the hands is fantastic.
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:52:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Michael Dom
Date: 2/1/2014 3:28:00 AM
thanks Sara :-)
Date: 1/27/2014 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, Michael
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Michael Dom
Date: 1/27/2014 10:43:00 AM
Dr Mehta thank you for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

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