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September Brides

SEPTEMBER BRIDES ` ` , ,,,, ,` `` ```,,,,,, ,````` magenta boughs sheer as bridal lace adorn mid summer-time trees they flutter like acrylic confetti glazed, and scattered on rapturous breeze Botticelli petals drift like scarlet flakes down to gather round pastoral feet, their fragrance fills September’s gown with brushstrokes so apricot sweet bridal trees alight as beguiling mists all clad in sultry glow’s array awoken by a waft of groom's kiss on this, God’s first September day... --------------------- quatrain © all rights reserved Especially for Brian’s September By nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:45:00 AM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH LUV AND BEAUTIFUL LINES LUV..

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/17/2011 10:17:00 PM

Congratulations Nette, I love the Botticelli petals. well done. cheers Marg.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/17/2011 7:42:00 PM

WOW!! congratulations on your win!-----Lori

John Freeman

Date: 9/17/2011 12:34:00 PM

Nette, Lovely Quatrain! a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/17/2011 12:10:00 PM

Well written nette. Congratulations on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/17/2011 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful, just Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved win. I have to keep this in my favorites.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2011 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, nette

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/4/2011 8:49:00 PM

Beautiful verse Nette on my favorite time of the year. You are in touch with this one.!

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/4/2011 6:08:00 PM

"with brushstrokes so apricot sweet" stood out as a best line for me. Loved it! Good luck as Brian judges. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/4/2011 3:45:00 PM

so very pleasant reading exquisite poetry created from your pen and emotion Nette luv.. good luck in the contest with this vibrant beauty luv..

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/4/2011 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful, simply beautiful! I think this is one of your best works Nette! I love the flow of this poem a lot, very wonderful!! You will do well in the contest!!

Judy Ball

Date: 9/4/2011 9:31:00 AM

This is the very best I've read so far Nette. Spectacular. Thanks for sharing this wonderful verse. No need to wish you good luck. It's first place for sure. God Bless, JB

Tony Lane

Date: 9/4/2011 8:07:00 AM

Beautiful entry Nette. Good luck with it. Tony

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2011 7:27:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Good luck..I am sure that Brian will enjoye this one...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 9/4/2011 4:20:00 AM

wow~~~a winning PIECE~~~good luck~~*-*smile my friend~*~

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/4/2011 3:12:00 AM

Nette~This is every bride's dream come true...the perfect dress and wedding. Is it all a dream or could it really be true? Fragrances filling a gown and apricot sweet? Your artistry strokes are all over designing this gorgeous piece. Humbled. simply humbled! Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 9/4/2011 2:52:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here Nette with elegent words.Another gem.Best wishes in Brian's contest.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/4/2011 2:46:00 AM

this one scores high in my expectation. But I did send you a soup mail about it. Charles