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September Air

September The month of my grandmother’s birth The birth of the cool breeze Flowing through the changing leaves Where the leaves wave Waving to the animals changing Changing their behavior to the weather Where weather turns bitter So bitterly cold, just up ahead The beginning of autumn Is now at hand, leading towards winter Secure your dwelling Both human and beast For September air is everywhere Russell Sivey Entrant into Brian Strand's September contest

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Date: 9/21/2011 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:40:00 AM
CONGRATS RUSSELL ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH GRAND WORDS OF EXPRESSION LUV...
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:55:00 AM
oh, russel.. you warmed me up despite the crisp chill of your winning piece.. congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian Strand's September contest. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations Russel, Nicely put, secure your dwelling... I like it. cheers Marg
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:07:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win! light & love
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Date: 9/17/2011 6:01:00 PM
congratulation on your first place win!!!! Truly a wonderful write!!--------Lori
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:37:00 PM
Well done Russell. Enjoyed the read. Congratulations
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:21:00 PM
Russell, quite a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:51:00 AM
Spectacular ending...! congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, Russell
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:37:00 AM
Good luck in the "September" poetry contest when Brian judges. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:07:00 AM
Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Russell. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 4:32:00 PM
Good luck with this fallish write..Reads like a winner..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2011 3:39:00 PM
wow Russell a great entry extolling September luv.. good luck with these powerful lines.. just did mine too.. awesome one..but now this is why I luv Summeer...
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