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SEPTEMBER Sneaking a few minutes from each day’s waning sun Each sunrise is later up, and its setting partner earlier down. Pigeons will soon be the only fliers left in the town: The migrants are going, or are packing bags quickly, Escaping to the warmth and song of the south country. My pansies are spreading without my restraint daily Because they know it’s last chance to colonise extra turf: Each fading beauty desperate to cling to mother-earth, Reaching down for sustenance now in dearth. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck for Carol Brown’s Contest FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 12:04:00 AM
Very nice, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Sydney
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:03:00 PM
Hey Sydney, Great write! Thought the second to last line was MINT! Congrats on the win, Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:13:00 PM
Sydney, September was a popular month in this contest. Smile. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:11:00 PM
hey Sydney congrats on your win, makes me want to migrate..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:51:00 PM
Syd, the migrants head here to Florida for the winter months. Enjoyed your description of shorter daylight hours, the emergence of "winter" flowers like pansies and especially the line about the pigeons being the "only fliers left in town." Way to go! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:30:00 PM
syd, happy to share the spot and the piece i wrote in your behalf, lol (j/kidding)...… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:06:00 PM
finally.. a sane ,solid write , syd!.. no worries, this won;t get a get a horrible mention; it will be unmentioned, hahhaha.. seriously, a terrific a blending of nature and human emotion; story that movies forward, extremely active emotional response.... where my crtique's fee?...:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:01:00 PM
Well I can feel September in your piece. I feel I should remove my foolish piece now. :-)
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