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A rare explosion Severed head from weary neck Pieces became flocks Vast number of ravens fly Killing the kicking body
Russell Sivey b) serious category Contest: Old or New in Five or less Sponsor: Francine Roberts 7/17/2013

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Date: 7/18/2013 3:12:00 PM
This is gruesome..I hope that it wasn't a recent happening and definitly hope that it was not your family..Thanks for your visits..I appreciate the time spent there..I hope that your life has about settled..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:36:00 PM
vividly expressed with such poetic impact, russell.. is this related to your recent accident?... wonderful work in its own league... congrats on your new wins!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:29:00 PM
wow, some great imagery in this one. Very imaginative, Russell.
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Date: 7/17/2013 9:34:00 AM
Pretty intense & fierce. I LIKE! Fantastic!
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Date: 7/16/2013 11:50:00 PM
Wow Russell, this is serious .....Seren
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Date: 7/16/2013 11:11:00 PM
Oooh really serious. I liked its composition and depth in so few lines.
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