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Separation

to be so far apart in so many different ways brings a hunger to my heart a sorrow to my soul. 'twas fate dictated our destinies that we were to be starcrossed in love. bittersweet is our portion, though we did fleetingly taste of intimacy's pleasures. that is the one memory we can cling to like the shipwrecked Odysseus clutching at a spar. you have lived locked in a loveless union too long. we were drawn together too late by a force momentarily too strong to resist. thus did nature play its cruel,insensitive trick.

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Date: 11/20/2019 7:56:00 AM
beautiful poem dear Dennis, has a tint of sorrow to it too. ~ thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-) ~luloo
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/20/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment.I would go as far to say that it is a luloo of a comment
Date: 11/19/2019 10:47:00 PM
Hi Denis congrats on your win
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/20/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you,Gregory, for your best wishes
Date: 11/19/2019 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/24/2019 7:57:00 PM
Anytime!;)
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Denis Bruce
Date: 11/19/2019 4:56:00 PM
Brenda, Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your wonderful comment

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