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Separation… If I am what I am, tell me, who are you? I am thinking of you; maybe I am you. There is oneness among us that covers all. I am him, and he is me, and we are you. I’m me, and you’re you, and you are me, I am you, and he is me; how could it be? I can see with my eyes, although it is dark. I am hoping to see all, as he might see. I am falling, and I don’t see the way out. You told me that there was an end to my route. I am falling into this bottomless pit, The truth is lost; there is room for little doubt. You told me to listen; I heard otherwise. You taught me to look at; I had blinded eyes. I wish that I could see that what the message is, I stumbled again, wondering with surprise. I wish to see the things all here and all there. A thousand mysteries I found everywhere. How can I trust my eyes, they betrayed my heart. But if my heart wants it, they see it as fair. I do not see myself as once that I was. I knew all the science and all of its laws. I wish I knew one more secrete in my life, How come I came to existence without cause? There was a time when I thought I knew it all. All of that I’ve learned made me stand tall. When I reached at the peak, I found out that I was, a kind of wonderer, however small. 6/10/18 Haloo The format of this poem is Rubaiyat, it is the plural of Rubai. Rubai is a quatrain with the rhyming of AABA. Each Rubai is a book by itself, it starts and ends within the quatrain, but when is in the form of Rubaiyat, it follows the same theme. Poetrysoup has a great explanation and examples.

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Date: 2/23/2023 7:38:00 PM
I read this through several times Pashang. Each time I discovered something new. I will think about this one for awhile I believe. :)
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Date: 1/6/2019 6:06:00 PM
Hi Pashang, dropping back with my congratulations on your win in the contest. Much deserved my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/7/2019 2:05:00 AM
Thanks, Mike... I Hope you had a great New Year...
Date: 1/6/2019 1:31:00 PM
- A great win, congratulations Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/7/2019 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise... you are so wonderful...
Date: 1/6/2019 11:00:00 AM
Great rubaiyat, and thought provoking poem my friend.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/7/2019 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Silent one...Thank you for considering my separation.
Date: 10/24/2018 7:59:00 AM
Hi Pashang,Another creative write that does showcase your poetic talent. As the years pass we come forth from life's cocoon and become what we were always meant to be. So many question. You always leave the reader with thoughts when one reads your wonderful work. Every piece is creative and you always pick the best form to suit your thought. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2018 1:49:00 AM
Thanks, Mike... I’m me and you’re you and you are me... I believe we are all connected.
Date: 10/4/2018 7:29:00 AM
love it! I love this topic, you express it so well, the struggle of duality and I love the lightness in the resolve and acceptance .. really lovely work Pashang.
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Date: 10/5/2018 2:26:00 AM
Even flow comes from harmony and harmony comes from intelligence... Thank you, my friend.
Date: 8/18/2018 11:44:00 AM
"Love your neighbor as yourself," is the key. It's called empathy and compassion now days and I can see that you are seeking someone who will empathize with you the way you empathize with them. Never give up hope, Pashang. When you stop searching and trust God to lead you with gratitude, your dreams will be fulfilled. Good poem expressing the desires of your heart and everyone's heart as well.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/18/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/9/2018 9:16:00 PM
We definitely change as we grow old and become who we truly are. you wrote this in a beautiful form, Well done
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/10/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, I know I am a butterfly...
Date: 7/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
This was very good
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/9/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Al...
Date: 7/9/2018 6:12:00 AM
Finding the way through the mysteries of life..Nicely penned Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/9/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Date: 7/9/2018 3:24:00 AM
woww
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/9/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Vidya for your exciting comment.
Date: 6/25/2018 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful, thought-provoking poetry, Pas! So many cool lines. Great poem! Love and joy always.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/10/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, my friend...
Date: 6/25/2018 3:12:00 AM
Excellent. A deep and thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi... you are a great friend.
Date: 6/22/2018 8:51:00 AM
Yes, I like that you have yourself tuned into the forces of nature, and that you realize that we are just searching and will find out things we may find difficult to combine into a whole. A lot of separate parts are not so easy to integrate. But then, each of us is an individual.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2018 7:54:00 PM
indeed...
Date: 6/21/2018 12:45:00 PM
Your last quatrain spills it all! Man is in constant quest for knowledge.. unveiling mysteries.. reaching for divine truth and beauty.. what man gets are sips that would never assuage their thirst for answers.. these sips keep Man ignited and alive.. A joy to read your write. Stay blessed Pashang.
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Besma...I think we all learn the message, but it might be too late to respond... According to the Dos Equis beer commercial... "Stay thirsty my friend" the thirst for knowledge... Blessing to you as well...
Date: 6/21/2018 11:01:00 AM
You have demonstrated great skill with this form Pashang, no small endeavor, well done...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/21/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, thanks for stopping by...
Date: 6/21/2018 7:35:00 AM
It's a really deep and wonderful poem, alot of thought have been put together in it and I am sure that this poem was really difficult to write especially tje form but still you have done a wonderful job in writing it, good luck
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/21/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Faraz. When you get to certain age, thinking is the only thing that you can do...
Date: 6/21/2018 7:30:00 AM
You have skills, this is very well expressed.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/21/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/18/2018 11:08:00 AM
We are all the same...only the space between us is different...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/20/2018 6:40:00 PM
Indeed... Thank you, WW...
Date: 6/16/2018 3:30:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, Pashang, i imagine, this being read by the author into a mirror, one line the question the next an answer,,,,anyhow, made me think,,as all wonderful poems do!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/16/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thanks, Harry... as I wrote for Eileen, once a teacher is always a teacher... Be well, my friend...
Date: 6/15/2018 1:35:00 AM
It is an interesting form, indeed. You make us go deeper into our souls to find answers.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/15/2018 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, a teacher is always a teacher... forgive me...
Date: 6/14/2018 8:22:00 PM
Pashang, very deep and thought provoking nicely done...Hugs Eve ~’*
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/15/2018 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 6/14/2018 1:34:00 PM
Such thought provoking lines Pashang, the poem contains so many truths and the final stanza is one many can relate too:-) I am missing your fabulous paintings!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/17/2018 4:08:00 PM
Hi Jan, I might stop working on something but I'm never finished. Of course you are immortalized.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2018 4:59:00 PM
I understand about your painting as I constantly edit one my poems until I'm happy to post it and I still edit it as I read it before pressing the send button, I'm sure the picture will be unveiled once you are happy with it ... I still love the one with the reflected dragonfly I am immortalised in your art forever:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/14/2018 5:11:00 PM
Hello, my dearest. Thanks for being so nice... I have one sitting in my room and looking at me for the past month or so. I don't like it and I keep changing it...
Date: 6/14/2018 11:01:00 AM
What a deep and powerful, philosophical Rubaiyat you have penned, my friend! You have raised pivotal questions that we all face as we go through life seeking to find out more about who we are as human beings. Excellently penned! Hugs. Pandita
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/14/2018 5:06:00 PM
Thanks, Pandita... my question is that, isn't it just a possibility that I'm right, and we're all one...
Date: 6/13/2018 3:13:00 PM
An excellent Rubaiyat containing a creative topic which you handle well, Pashang. I like how you thrust and probe...reminds me of a fencer using an epee! Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/14/2018 3:15:00 AM
Paul, you are always so kind to me... I believe in the oneness...
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