Separated

Sad sounds young apart From mother longing empty Joy when united

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Roberlynn Jones

Date: 9/7/2009 7:44:00 AM

nice poem

Jared Pickett

Date: 8/18/2009 8:22:00 AM

So much in so little....AWESOME tale......:JP]

Mary Duhart

Date: 8/18/2009 4:38:00 AM

Excellent description of separation. Great write.

James Fraser

Date: 8/17/2009 10:32:00 AM

My mother left my Father, Brother and me when i was 6, i have seen her about 4 times since 1969. I don't even thunk about her now and never will>>James

Diane Christian

Date: 8/17/2009 7:05:00 AM

I can relate to this one sara, my mum left home when I was 11 and I lived with my dad the pain of seperation was great for all of us sadly I did not get the united bit she neevr came back for us, but I did get to see her once in a blue moon but it's nott he same, A powerful write, God bless you from diane