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When the fire of Autumn fills limbs of trees, And its light covering frost comes around. I remember that summer's wet leaves, With your fading footprints in its soft ground. Distant season, colored forever blue. A faint memory of love to remain. Caused by a lasting silhouette of you, Disappearing in the falling rain. A birthright below, a love to lament, Paused by a dream of your eyes I still hold. Reliving the times when bodies were spent. When the bond from a kiss crossed a threshold. She loved a boy from a commonplace. She said goodbye with a tender embrace. contest..When Love was Innocent

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Date: 5/28/2015 6:40:00 AM
This is a lovely sonnet, full of tenderness and feelings. A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Frederic! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.
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Date: 5/19/2015 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations Fredric on the H M received..'
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:30:00 AM
Frederic:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:16:00 PM
Another nice sonnet from your prolific pen. Enjoyed. BG
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